Alright third time now. My rough draft is done.

So I finally finished it and I would love some critique on it! I’m not too satisfied with the ending, but it’s due tomorrow, so I might have been a little more lenient with the writing aspect. Anyway, the concept I was trying to get across was this: That human beings created the gods. I tried to be rather subtle about it so it wouldn’t come across as ham fisted, but I’m not sure if I achieved that. Any critique would be good—whether it’s on dialogue, descriptions, characterization, etc. 

So here it is: The Court (You’ll have to read it off of tumblr because for some reason it wouldn’t let me include a break when I posted, and it’s really too long for other peoples’ dashboards.)

(If you have other title suggestions, that would be great as well. I’m absolutely awful at titling things.)