So intros and conclusions are the hardest aspects of writing for me. Here’s the first bit of a story I’m working on, about a graphic novelists mental decay. It’s called Mirror^2 for the time being. I hope the uncomfortably sexual aspects of this carried through, as that’s going to be a major theme in it. Let me know what you think! If you read just this first bit, would you continue reading? I’m also trying to communicate a particular aspect of Ken’s lifestyle without it being TOO obvious at first. So, with that said, please let me know what time of day you think this scene is taking place in. Be as harsh as you like!
I guess I should also mention that there’s nothing pornographic here. Just innuendos/allusions/whatEVER but no sex. So, uh, no worries there.